Moonlight Excerpt
So, here’s what I’m working on in Moonlight right now. I just finished the big first-time love scene (which I really don’t like, for some reason. I’ve read it with a critical eye, and I can’t find exactly what’s bothering me, but as a whole, I don’t like it. Hopefully, I can get some feedback from readers when I post it and together we can figure it out. ^_^) I’m just about done with Ch. 28. Ch. 29 will be the scene from Broken Wings where Jak heals Izeri’s wounds and finds out Charias bit him.
And now, a snippet from Ch. 28:
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